Showing posts with label Science Fiction. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Science Fiction. Show all posts

Wednesday, 7 August 2013

Story Ideas 6: The Galactic Opera Series Triology

Working Title (codename): The Galactic Opera Series Trilogy (Romance of the Three Kingdoms in Space Trilogy)

Setting tagline: Earth, solar system, Galaxy, Space, planetary Colony

Expected media form factor: Novel Series, Movie, Multimedia Experiences.

Type: War / grand adventure / biopic / future human history

Maturity: Major Characters of many of the sub story plots developed, over all plot framework of one series completes, introduction written for one.

This project is a combination of Three Separate Epic Space Opera Series. However the all three can be traced to the famous Chinese Ming dynasty novel: Romance of the Three Kingdoms. It literarily began as a version of Romance of the Three Kingdoms in space for the first story of the Trilogy.

By Time line of initial development:
Solar Series  1993
Race Series  1997
Religion Series  2002



Solar Series (ideology):

It is called Solar Series because it took place only in our Solar System. It was about conflict of three politically divided fractions in a period of Earths future history where humans colonised the inner solar system planets. The three ideology  fractions are Neo Socialism of Planet Venus, Grand Capitalism of planet Earth and Militarism of Planet Mars. (Hence it can also be call the Ideology series)

Each fractions leaders believe they have the military might and political will to unite the people of the Solar system, hence war broke out between the three fractions.

This series was originally inspired by the famous Japanese novel Legends of the Galactic Heroes, but it draws heavily from Romance of the Three Kingdoms in character design also borrowed from Mobile Suit Gundam series in space colony and military setting.

One of the tragic event in the progression of the Earth bound human civilization to space colony world was developed in to a standalone movie story I labelled it ''Titanic in space''.

A sequel to the ideology series was scrapped for having too much resemblance to Legends of the Galactic Heroes in fraction setting.


Race Series

If the Solar series mark the creative process of mimicking famous prior works then Race Series is a natural progression in development of fresh ideas that has not been attempted before.

Started out as an excuse to use my own surname for the central character,  it grown from  the best elements already developed from the scrapped sequel to the Solar series in a totally different backdrop.  It evolved in to my first character driven plot that with an open ending.

It does carry loose continuity connection to the Solar series but the divided waring fraction in this time are based on the three major races of the human civilization: Caucasians, Asians and Africans.  

The world design still retain the Gundam like technology but on planetary scale. Battles still resemble closely with modern day war and world war two.

The main story focus on the reluctant younger son of a famous fleet commander in the Asian fraction where he must bear the weight of the family name and tradition to become as famous as his dad. Then he faces political infighting and on battlefield rivalry from allied culture such as Japan and Korea while battle the Caucasian forces.

The setting of the universe allow me to infuse political commentary of existing cultures and provide subjective and objective analyses to Asian, Caucasian and African cultures. It is way more complex than the political ideology set up in the Solar Series .



Religion Series

The bravest and most controversial of the three Galactic Epics, this plot draws no relation with the previous two what so ever. It bares much more western science fiction setup than Eastern culture stories for inspiration.

Just as the series title suggest this series' divided fractions are based on the major religion of the planet earth. The three fractions are: Christianity, Islam and multicultural Atheist.

Development began shortly after the war on terror period in early 2000s, it centres on three characters, two whom are moles sent to the religious fractions by the Atheist fraction that were once the unified galactic governing body of the human race across the galaxy.

Like the ideology series before it, each fraction believe they should be the dominant of the human race hence once again, wars of enormous scale ensures.

Unlike the previous two series where technology contain within the Gundam Robot as aircraft and tank, carrier task force, combine battle group framework in the last century. The technology in this universe has greater gap where each fraction, and they have unique weapons, strength and weakness.

Ultimately the plot was a self study of what damage it can cause with what I called 'human self-entric elevation': when a group of people believe their belief is the ultimate truth and everyone else should accept with no condition. Due to the controversial religious context, the difficulty of the research in both religions hinder plot development for the characters in the two religious cultures.



Summary:

The three Galactic Epic has covered ideology politics, race and religion conflict of the human race, I believe I have done enough incarnations of Romance of the Three Kingdoms in space.



Sunday, 10 February 2013

Story Idea 5: Mobile Suit Gundam R, project: Revolution


Working Title (codename): Mobile Suit Gundam R / project: Revolution

Setting / keyword: Gundam, Galaxy, War, Future, Mobile Suit, UC, Giant Robot, ZAKU, MS

Expected media formfactor: High production quality mini-series, Multimedia Experiences, Game, scale model series

Story Type: War / Action adventure / gundam

Maturity: Characters, 80% of the detailed plot framework for entire series completed, Season one story line well developed. Technical design features for season 1 / 2 developed.

Visual media Format: TV /OVA level animations
episode Length: 45 minutes

Projected Seasons: 4 , 12-15 Episode per season.
Season one budget: 15 million USD

Universe Settings:

Space Colony World where groups of O'Neil class space colonies were build around the earth orbits just as traditional UC Gundam universes. Human exploration has reached on Mars, Venus plus moons of Jupiter.

Back story:

It was the end of the space migration era, where 96% of human population were migrated to space, leaving the polluted earth behind to recover. To speed up the process, thousands of nuclear fusion reactors are to be build, aim to use energy to filter to convert earth back to the clean state, yet it was projected to require 300 years to finish the project even it was to run at maximum capacity.
An unexpected virus suddenly spread through the space colonies, reached pandemic level quickly.
The Solar Federation was caught off guard for such an event, its heavy handed tactics in treating millions of carriers of the virus resulted three dozen colonies declare independence from the Federation. Among these colonies, Side 2 whom was the oldest of the colony groups became the strongest of the resistance forces. Its invention: a true militarised Mobile SUIT call: Gundam was so far ahead of anything Federation had in their arsenal, it quickly became symbol of Rebel resistance. 
The virus crisis quickly escalated in to what was known as the 200 days war. Federation won the war by mass producing  and convert colony construction MS call ZAKU and build thousands of cheap destroyers. However, during the lasts days of the war, a majority of colonies in side 2 mounted powerful booster rockets on their colonies and accelerated them away from Earth colony orbit.

The Federation then rounded up all those supported and joined the resistance as well as tens of millions of carrier of the virus, exile them on to the polluted earth and force them to work on the Earth regeneration project. Turning the whole planet a prison camp.

Season one: Rebel (brief note)

17 years has passed since the 200 days war, the location of the escaped Rebel colonies has been found: they anchored around a gigantic asteroid near the Mars orbit.

The Federation has since built up a huge military to eliminate the rebels. Just as the biggest expedition fleet ever assembled set sail towards its target, an uprising suddenly occurred on Earth.
Four new generation Gundams secretly assembled on Earth became the arrow head of the uprise movement. Caught by surprise Federation forces on earth was quickly apprehended, the orbital ring structure lost to Earth Rebels.

Colony security force found the four Gundams are each equal in power to a hundred ZAKUs. These four Gundams alone was capable of turning the tide of battle, defeating the Federation's first large scale counter attack to retake Earth.

After a costly defeat on Earth, the Federation had to divert half of the expedition fleet back to Earth in a hurry. Prompting  the Rebel colonies: Anti-Federation Alliance to launch their offensive on the expedition fleet, leading the battle is Gundam MK-IX, the direct descendent of the Gundam design 17 years ago.

Outcome for this war will be unpredictable as military might clash on two very different battle fields at about the same time...

Development notes:

The story has been in development for well over ten years, initially based upon the multi gundam multi character model pioneered by Gundam Wing. More elements from real world events such as SARs epidemic inspire new ideas help evolve the story further. Female as central lead characters were established early on, the conflict on how she use her powers was always the central theme of the story since girls shouldn't like the massive killing business, a complex mystery plot was developed around her character that would last the whole four seasons.

The US style 45 minute version won over traditional 22 minute model because more story can be tell and more intense per episode just as the UC OVAs would achieve. Four seasons was needed to tell the whole story. The release format is to be on Bluray and show on Western TV as full on adult entertainment. There is really no need for a TV series as today's multi delivery medium ensures it will reach billions watch them fast and sell the models to make money instead.

The show will last four seasons, roughly four years run time. The first season was set to be action pack to set the conflicts of the universe and with 2nd and 3rd season deepens the mysteries and conflicts between rival political camps and subsequently build up for a final conclusion season that again feature battle in a massive scale.

Temporary title for rest of the seasons:

  • ·         Season 2: Reclaim
  • ·         Season 3: Revelation
  • ·         Season 4: Requiem

Note on character development:

This story is conceived as a Gundam Animation to be watched by first generation fans together with their children and the Seed generation fans would connect with.
The four pilots of the four Super gundams were two girls and two boys, age from 14-17. Among the four, the two girls are the key to the entire plot:


  • ·         Primary Lead girl: age 14, Drive a Close Combat Energy weapon Gundam
  • ·         Secondary Lead girl: age 17, Pilot the Ballistic weapon Gundam
  • ·         Lead boy: age 15, Use Zeta like Gundam
  • ·         Secondary Lead boy: age 16, operate Cannon Gundam

The four pilot's amazing skills to drive these machines will be properly explained and how they use their unique ability to drive these machines would be a central part of their character developments (i am very realistic on this front, so no kid that has not touch anything or training in episode one can be super pilots in my story, all of them will have a back-story.)

Since the aim is to include UC Fans who would be in their 30s and early 40s, there will be secondary adult lead characters in their late 30s, some will be the guardian to the children. Their parental / teacher relationship to the lead kids would be part of the interconnected character plot.  Then there is the character conflicts from the first War, which was visioned as Char and Ray rivalry / archenemies on the battle field. A few set of characters: two MS designers, two ace hero pilots, two tacticians would continue their conflicts in a personal level.

Character growth is key to the plot, all the four kid characters will grow up in the course of the war, their views on war, world, human equality, love and life will change. For the adult characters, they face decisions that affect the kids and their own battles with their past and present demons. Many of these character plot are set to occurred in the 2nd and 3rd seasons which has lesser large scale battles and more about mysteries and personal level plot twists.

Note on Gundam Design:
At one stage, there were five gundams, later on was modified to four. It bears some similarities to the concepts in 00 by coincident.

  • The lead Gundam which is to be pilot by the 14 year old girl is an energy weapons centric close combat Gundam with femme features (one likely resemblance is that Evolved QuanT). 
  • The next gundam pilot by the 17 year old girl is a projectile centric model akin to the two used by the lockon brothers in 00. 
  • Then there is a Zeta inspired transformable delta wing gundam, 
  • A Cannon weapon centric semi transformable ZZ like unit. 
  • The originally planned   Strike / Impulse like multi role model was lifted to appear in the second season.


A lot of commercial factors are in-cooperated into the plot for model development. The gundams would go for face lifts and redesigns in every subsequence seasons. Hence there will be at least 4 versions for each of them.

Federations would develop more and more powerful machines that are not gundam like to counter them and shorten the technology gap (unlike what happen in 00).
The battles in this story are serious military type heavy with tactics and use of various types weapons and hardware, as the adult characters play key roles in these battles as they continue their rivalry.

The four Super Gundams are like a regiment of Tiger Tanks in WW2, which can obtain massive localised battlefield superiority  yet not enough to win strategically in the overall battle.

Note on other designs:
  • ·         There would be no odd ball particles that can bend physics in different areas as the GN particle did, but will have some SF elements that is more believable and in-cooperate as much real science as possible.
Political Factions:

  • ·         United Federation of Colonies, (UFC) the official bad guy of the Story
  • ·         Anti Federation Alliance (AFA), the good guys, formed by Side 2 nation: ZEON after 200 days war.
  • ·         Earth Liberation Front (ELF), The Earth fraction of the upraising
  • ·         Mars Exploration Territory (MET), a supposed Neutral organisation  
  • ·         Venus Energy Gathering Automated Networks (VEGAN), a supposed Neutral organisation
  • ·         Utopic Colony Experiment (UCE), a Federation colony for 'advanced' and 'evolved' humans.
  • ·         Fringe Resource Exploration Co (FREC), a mysterious company 

Wednesday, 21 November 2012

Story iDea 4:Total Annihilation: Supreme Commander



Working Title (project codename): Total Annihilation: Supreme Commander

Setting / keyword: Galaxy, War, Future, Cloning, Giant Robot, Total Annihilation, Supreme Commander

Expected media formfactor: Movie, Multimedia Experiences, Game

Story Type: War / Action adventure / kind of family biopic / love story

Maturity: Character over all plot framework for first movie complete, wrote the first few scene of the script in story form but forgot where I backed it up.

This story was born out of my love of what i recon as the best real time strategy war game ever: Total Annihilation. Development began roughly in 1998s when i wrote a short story containing element of that game at the time.

That short story established all the ground work of what a rich and realistic Total Annihilation Universe was like and continue to expend when the spiritual sequel of the game: Supreme Commander came out in mid 2000s. Elements of Supreme Commander was in cooperated in to the plot as it is today.

Complex characters were added because is indented as a movie script, the story eventually become some sort of biopic, it centres around a thousand years old, legendary field commander of the ARM faction, his relationships with best friend, his school age sweet heart, his thousand year long relationship with his current wife and his children and student!!!

Despite all the family mess, love quartangles, it still involve multiple planetary scale battle sequences, giant robots crashing with mega weapons, result in huge explosions and fueling emotion. It has explores serious spiritual concepts and what means to be human.....

(After Pacific Rim (2013): this script would be just as good in giant robot action but tons deeper in philosophy plus it has a decent love story. My plot has battle sequences dwarf the Pacific Rim or anything before it in scale while still able to focus on the rivalry and emotion or two pair of torn apart lovers.)


Plot introductory tag line:

What began as a conflict over the transfer of consciousness from flesh to machines escalated into a war which has decimated a million worlds. The Core and the Arm have all but exhausted the resources of a galaxy in their struggle for domination. Both sides now crippled beyond repair, the remnants of their armies continue to battle on ravaged planets, their hatred fueled by over one thousand years of total war. This is a fight to the death. For each side, the only acceptable outcome is the complete elimination of the other.

Now,two master tacticians of each fraction, best mates a thousand years ago believe they (on their own) have come up with a way to finally win the war once for all.... 

Friday, 19 October 2012

Story iDea 2: MU:The Next Avatar?

Working Title (codename): Project: MU

Setting: Near Future, Earth like Alien planet

Expected media formfactor: Movie, Multimedia Experiences.

Type: Science Fiction / War / Action adventure / fable

Maturity: Finished, 100 chapter written, firmed major character and plot development. Extra detailing and minor plot doctoring.

This story was born out of one Chinese Idiom.

Development began roughly in 2000.

Early ideas were a large scale action sequences, involve world war two style military hardware. The 2003 Iraq war brought more political arrogance into the plot, other real life world event up to 2007 also influenced the plot.

Eventually the story was completed in 2009 with three key grand scale action sequences, one bigger than the one preceded it. I was surprised by the movie Avatar in 2010 for the number of similarities between my story: Human travel to Alien Planet with larger body size Aliens civilization; War between Human and Aliens; Humans aid the Aliens; High-tech war machine against Low tech military.

Plot introductory:

The discovery of an Alien device in the Bermuda region turned out to be a intergalactic teleporter. Those transported over by accident found themselves stranded on an Earth like planet where its human and Alien habitants are engaged in a titanic crash of civilizations. For those from earth they must choose sides before they figure out how to stop to the devastation as well as find ways to return to Earth.  

Tuesday, 9 October 2012

Star Wars Project: Archery, chapter 1


The last one was boring... so this one is relatively action packed...


Chapter 1


Zyjin was dreaming again, he let the force float through him, even with his eyes closed, he would ‘see’ by the sense of the force the two incoming star fighters in his dream. He himself, was inside the cockpit of his own standard issue Delta-7-D Aethersprite-class light interceptor or the Jedi Starfighter for short. Master Toorani’s Delta-7-C was right beside. Both fighters still have their hyper space ring module attached. A couple of hooks have ejected from the rings' hard points into the rocks close by, the strain from the hooks secured both fighters in a stationary position. The two Star fighters were engulfed inside the ‘cave’ of a large pot shaped asteroid. The Jedis maneuvered their flights through the narrow circular entrance to hide.

Two more Delta-7 variants are approaching fast. One of them has an eye catching blue paint job the other has a standard ordinary red paint scheme.
(http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Delta-7_Aethersprite-class_light_interceptor)

The two new comers came to a relative stop at the entrance of the cave. Then, the red Delta-7 turned itself around with thrusters, enter the cave tail first, then slowly it reversed park inside the asteroid and parked right on top of the other two star fighters already inside. The modified blue fighter simply fired its boosters, headed inside the cave head first, then it made a 180 degree turn inside the cave, smoothly park itself right on group on top of Zyjin’s Star fighter. That blue star fighter was the Azure Angel, a heavily modified Delta-7 piloted by Anakin Skywalker.

Zyjin has witnessed Anakin’s smooth move as opposite to the red Delta-7’s careful mechanical routine. Clearly, Anakin was docking his fighter with his piloting skills, whereas the other craft handed the job to the droid.

A series short beeps kick started Zyjin’s helmet ear piece, came the interception of conversation between the two new comers. The droids onboard all four Jedi star fighters have initiated their point to point communication link, one that was done via visual optical signals at very short range instead of emitting board frequencies that would be intercepted by the enemy.

‘… they would be here any moment Anakin, you should just fly in first and save a few more seconds...’ the chatter was the voice of Jedi General, Master Obi-wan Kenobi.

‘Yes master, I know, but I would be in a better position to intercept and defend ourselves as the rear guard, and besides, you are the master, you should be the first to enter.’ Anakin Skywalker speaks with his energetic voice.

‘…Welcome to the old cup, Gentlemen!’ Toorani greeted the two via the comm.-link. ‘I wasn’t expecting reinforcements on this scale, Jedi General (Major) Kenobi and top ace of the republic, (Lieutenant) General Skywalker. It is better than fleets of bombers. I am glad to have you two on board. Welcome to the fun!’

‘Our fleet is refitting closest to this position when you sent request to the war council. It is too good to miss such chance indeed. There is nothing better in this war than blasting those droids back to dust while they still packed up in freighters.’ Kenobi was pleased. ‘and, looks like today is the day the clone pilots talked about come true at last. The three top ace of the republic fighting side by side.’
‘Aces don't meant much fighting a thousand working droid fighters, but let’s hope we do have enough fire power to doom a fleet load of inactive ones.’ Toorani agreed. ‘Finally I get to see Anakin in action. We have a lot to learn from him, Kenobi, Anakin’s kill score was more than the two of us combine.’

‘That was merely because I was at the front, facing the dumb droids, Master Toorani. You and Onmikhan were fighting all those prototypes, custom made droids all the time. Much deadlier than ones I kill. Numbers don’t count. I should be the one learning.’ Anakin returned the praise politely.
‘So what is actual plan? We left in a hurry, mine fill us in.’ Kenobi ask, ‘I didn’t detect any separatists ships or bases in the systems nearby.’

‘I will let my young apprentice explain. Your term to speak.’ Toorani handed over to Zyjin.
‘Yes master, R-8 projections!’ He paused to wait for a hologram emitted from Zyjin’s astro-droid.
It was a map of the nearby sector, projected to the centre space of the cave.

‘It has been six months since Geonosis. We have so far encountered more than nine million droids at the front. At the beginning, our forces already faced an enemy with a numerical superiority that was roughly five droids for one clone on any battlefield. That number has just risen to six for one. That increase was gain after we have destroyed seven droid planetary foundries, each with production capacity of eighty thousand B1 a week. The numbers are still raising mean only one thing, there are a lot more factories out there. While we tried our best to find the factories, our team has found the next best thing, a list of rally points that the droids made by various factories would be delivered to and empty separate cruisers would pick them up.’
(http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/B1_battle_droid)

The projected star map highlighted a few spots mostly at remote, low population regions of the galaxy.

‘These are the most frequently used rally points confirmed so far. This one has reported hot activities in recent weeks. We have creditable intelligent indicated two deliveries of droids from factories unknown will be inbound in any moment.’

The Star map then shrank in size and a hologram of some sort of bomb was displayed.
‘This is the republic’s latest secret weapon, the Immobilizer bomb. If detonated, the blast would prevent starships within a radius of ten thousand klicks jumping to hyperspace for about 500 seconds. It is still on a trial phrase, there would still be side effects that we do not aware of. We have special clearance to use it on this mission. Each of us will have three on our payload. Use them at your own will.’
Master Toorani cut in: ‘Master Kenobi, your share of the bombs are here, my apology for not bring a ground crew with us. We must arm them at once.’ He use the force to open up a crate in front his star fighter, reveal inside were six immobilizer bombs.

‘Oh, no worries my friend, we got used to grabbing supplies without even landing our ship these recent months. Anakin, load them up!’ Kenobi turned to Anakin, ‘I sense they are about to arrive.’
‘Yes master!’

At once, Anakin concentrated himself with the force, the first bomb rise from the crate and follow by the second and third, all three headed to the hard points on Kenobi’s fighter. R-4, Kenobi’s astrodroid beeped fanatically from Kenobi’s comm. link, acknowledging the the bombs were successful secured. Anakin wasted no time as he quickly transferred his payload of bombs to his fighter. Hooked them to the hard point right before hyperspace activities registered on the hologram projected from Zyjin’s droid.

‘Here they come!’ Toorani began to adjust controls responsible for controlling the asteroid they were in. Slowly, the entire asteroid turned. It is obvious this asteroid was not there by any chance, it was a modified forward observation post. The strange shape was chosen so craft or observation droids can be easily hidden inside it. Its outer rock formation was installed with small boosters to provide slow mobile movement that are hard to be detected by system wide sensor unless at a very close range. Visually the entire asteroid would move like it was propelled by natural inertia.

Since the asteroid is to be abandoned after this mission, it has no hyper drive, the Jedis don’t mind it was going to be detected this final time of use, their cover is going to be blown the moment their fighters appear from inside it. Therefore Toorani programmed the asteroid to fly towards the point of activity in the star system at full speed.

* * *

A gigantic freighter ship came out of hyperspace. The three dozen vulture droid fighters attached on its hull during hyperspace travel immediate took off securing the area. The freighter ship was over seven thousand meters long. Its rhombus angular shape boxy main body gave it an even more enlarged, massive appearance visually. There were multiple docking arms seem randomly positioned on the main hull body, made the ship looked like a cactus build of steel.
(http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Variable_Geometry_Self-Propelled_Battle_Droid,_Mark_I)

A second vessel of identical design came out of hyperspace moments after the first.

The Neimoidian captain of the second huge freighter ship looks out from the tiny windows of the bridge. He was anxious, he was late because his freighter's hyper drive malfunctioned. He was supposed to be here forty minutes ago. Worst, there were no other CIS ships around the rally area besides the two lone freighters. His squads of vultures are his only protection.
(http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Neimoidian)

‘What is going on! Where are the other ships!’ The captain yell at the droid bridge hand next to him, ‘have the system fully scanned.’

‘Yes Sir! Scanning!’ Droid replied. ‘But, sir, our sensor are not powerful enough to scan the whole system!’

‘What! This madness, Spread out the fighters, secure the area!’

‘Yes Sir!’

* * *

A schematic of the freighter was projected inside the cave, as Zyjin explains to Anakin and Obi-wan, its weakness.

‘The Blocton class droid freighter, it is a lazy design but effective none the less in feeding droids to CIS warships. Those feeding arms once extended and connect to the CIS ships, would transport one hundred droids a minute each. The belly of the beast can house at least half million B1 and B2 droids with room to spread. However, like many CIS warship designed in a hurry before the war, it has fatal weakness. In this case, it was structural.’

Zyjin continue to fill in the detail but he raised his eyes to look out of the opening of the cave, he would see the two freighters through the cave opening ahead as two tiny shiny dot.

‘These points, if hit by a missile or proton torpedo, would smash the ship’s structural integrity. We expect once four out of six of these areas were hit, it would fall apart. As simple as that. Is everything clear?’

‘Looks like it is going to be a easy.’ Anakin was also looking out via the opening.

‘Don’t under estimate the enemy Anakin, they would be carrying ten thousand vulture fighters.’
Kenobi tries to tame Anakin down, he then turn to Master Toorani, ‘Do they have a droid control unit on those ship?’

‘Yes, they do, but not an all powerful one that would control every droid they carry on board, but more than a handful I am sure.’ Toorani replied putting the best answer he can think of.

‘I say we go out in the open and race there, we would deploy the bombs before they jump. It is far too slow traveling inside this thing.’ Anakin was impatient. ‘With the size of that thing, they will need a lot of time to charge up their slow hyper drivers, I say we got enough time.’

‘We will do it the safe way, Anakin.’ Obi-wan still can’t put down his old habit picked up while he was Anakin’s Master, often disapproves Anakin’s crazy plans. 

* * *

‘Sir, we detected an asteroid heading this way.’ One B1 bridge worker droid reported to the captain of the freighter.

‘Show me!’ The captain turn to see a hologram of the incoming, it is heading straight at them. He doesn’t like what he saw. ‘Send a dozen vultures to blast it out!’
‘Yes sir!’

* * *

‘Master, we are now less than ten thousand klicts, twelve incoming, vultures.’ Zyjin report his readings.

‘Only twelve?’ Anakin was surprised. ‘I say we go now!’ He look over to Obi-wan.

Kenobi gave it a short thought and nodded. ‘Let’s go Master Toorani, I believe Anakin and Zyjin can deploy the bombs in time. We will cover them.’

‘Agree! Let’s go! Zyjin, give our guests their gifts!’ Toorani reach to power up his yellow paint scheme fighter.

‘Gladly! Master!’ Zyjin reach for the controls. In a patch of empty space inside the cave a container powered up, it was a cluster of 12 concussion missiles. Zyjin have them locked on the unsuspected vultures. ‘R8, Fire!’

In a matter of seconds, all twelve missiles shoot out of the moving pot asteroid, headed straight towards the enemy.

The vultures reacted, breaking formation. Since all missiles had a firm lock on its targets. It went on pursuit right away.

‘Go Anakin, you first.’

‘Zyjin, after Master Kenobi.’ 

The two Jedi masters issue order to their apprentice at once.

Anakin didn’t answer. He detached the hooks, his thrusters at max. In less than a second, he was freely in space. After jettison of the hyperspace ring, he plotted a route that he would fly pass the possible path of at least three vultures evading the missiles on their tail, while remain headed for the freighter at full speed.

Obi-wan followed Anakin in slower pacing. Flying was for droids, he always needed time to adjust to it every time he returned to fly.

Suddenly, he found Zyjin zoomed pass him from behind.

 ‘Oh, I forgot that!’ Obi-Wan realized what was dragging him, as Zyjin left the hyper space ring behind. soon after he got out of hiding. He signaled R4 to separate his craft with the hyper space ring and together with Master Toorani, all four Delta shaped Jedi Star fighters went in to battle.

Zyjin, like Anakin ploted a path that would ran across vultures. But there weren’t much left as two third of the missiles, which all personally tuned up by Zyjin and Toorani hit their targets. For the remaining four, two went right into Anakin’s projected course, were instanly turned in to fireballs by just four shots from Anakin’s guns.

For the remaining two, one had itself head on towards Zyjin and was too easy as target. The last one managed to shake off the missile and before he tries to Ram towards to Toorani, it was blasted to pieces by Kenobi’s guns.

* * *

‘Sir, four Jedi Star fighters heading this way!’ Another Droid on the bridge report with their signature cold tune.

‘What! Nonsense. Let me see!’ After the captain confirmed the visuals, he panic, ‘Blast! Send out all available fighters at once! This is madness! Where are the cruisers? I don’t want to die here! Prepare my shuttle!’

* * *

‘Look at the size of that thing!’ Obi-wan speak with amazement. ‘I wonder why they don’t build guns on the hull.’

‘Careful of what you wish for, master!’ Anakin’s voice came in the every one's ear piece, ‘they are releasing dwarf spider droids on to the hull!’
(http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/DSD1_dwarf_spider_droid)

‘Oh I see it! This is still relatively easy!’ Kenobi kept his claim as usual as the pair headed towards one freighter.

* * *

‘Try to get closer, we don’t know how effective this bomb is!’ Toorani reminds his student.

‘Don’t worry master, thank you for drawing antiaircraft fire away from me. I will go deploy the bomb now.’ Zyjin use the force to help him concentrate, as he plotted the route with least enemy fire in front of him. ‘R8, boost preset 3.’

The droid clicked to acknowledge. Immediately, Zyjin felt the inertia of speed pushing him to his seat. His fighter, although not modified like Anakin’s, has done a lot of tuning to make the best out of it.

When he was about five thousand meters in front of the freighter, he detonated the first bomb. The blast sent out a dim shockwave across the affected region, disrupting gravity.

* * *

Soon after the bomb was deployed there was a shuttle leaving the Freighter, one that has a hyper drive. The captain suddenly discovers his craft isn’t going anywhere after he order the droid to jump to hyper space. ‘What is going on here?! Report! Report!’

‘Sir, we cannot jump to hyperspace, due to gravity distortion.’ 

‘Blast! This is not a good day to die! Certainly not out here, get me back to the ship!’

* * *

After he deployed his first gravity bomb, Anakin turn his fighter to go after the first weak point. It was at the engine backbone region. By this time, there were over a thousand spider droids on the hulls of both freighters, blasting every gun to their fast moving targets, sadly for them, these droids aren't designed for use in space, their targeting system not well tuned for shooting fast moving planes, it little to no lethal effect. All their shorts miss Anakin, it was the newly launched a dozen vulture fighters on his back he needs to pay some attention to.

Similar situation over with Zyjin, a  dozen vultures were tracing him.

‘Master, go for weak point 3, aim your missiles. I can’t get a lock, until I shake these off.’

‘Got it, firing!’ Toorani, sent out two missiles towards the upper backbone of the freighter, hitting the target. The subsequent explosion it causes sent hundreds of spider droids into space.

Anakin manage to hit his target with a proton torpedo payload he had on his craft, while using the hull of the Freighter as cover, he out turn the vultures along the hull, made three crashed into the high raise feeding arms. then blasted three in one go with a quick and sharp rolling turn, before the rest of the droids change tactic from tracing him and spread out.

‘This is easier than expected…’ Anakin appear to be enjoying himself once again.
Kenobi, having the force with him today, already destroyed another weak point, but before Kenobi managed answer to Anakin’s comment, he found their luck suddenly ran out.

Directly off portside of their target freighter a Providence-class carrier drop out of hyperspace. It came in the vase space right between the two gigantic freighters.
(http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Providence-class_carrier/destroyer)

‘Oh dear!’ Obi wan instinctively commented.

* * *

Since there were two gigantic freighters here packed full with weapons, having a Providence-class carriers in to meet them shouldn't be a surprise at all.

Zyjin was trying shake of a wing of vultures behind him by flying away from his target towards Anakin's target, but all those trace signals suddenly vanished, the hyperspace gravity disruption crashed the tracers ahead of the trace pack and the rest has to pan out to avoid crashing onto the newly arrived carrier.

Zyjin would be killed if he was two second late to his position when the carrier came out of hyperspace. Not time to contemplate whether it was his luck or was the force saved him, he was immediately confronted with all their new problem: what just saved him is blocking him from targeting of the weak points on his freighter. ‘Blast! Master! Go get weak point 6, you should be able to do it.’ 

‘No Zyjin, I will have to deploy another bomb, prevent them from escaping. You are on your own!’
Without other choices, Zyjin yank his fighter off to a path to avoid the carrier to stay on target, evading a barrage of deadly anti fighter cannons from the carrier.

He decided to go for the top side of the freighter, hit two weak points at once, and so complete the mission. Then, suddenly a missiles warning alerted him, the carrier has loads of missile launchers and they only have four targets, they still have some of them left.

To avoided being tailed on the massive war front, Anakin and Kenobi have learned to help each other by flying towards each other, so each can blast the enemies projectiles or fighters behind each other’s tail. Both of them would go pass each other in space so close that they would reach for handshakes if there weren’t cockpits between them.  

For Kenobi's target, only one more weak-spot is required for mission success. Anakin knew the longer they stay, the more CIS ships would come in and that newly arrived carrier is not helping.
‘Master, you are flying along the starboard hull of the Carrier aren’t you? Can you blast the starboard hanger bay shield generators for me now?’

‘Yes, I am nearing there, what are you thinking?’

‘I am going to take this thing out!’ he kicked his fighter to max speed, made a fanatical run towards the carrier towards the shielded hangar bay from the port side, blasters at max destroying the protecting cannons and shield generators. ‘I am counting on you Master!’

‘I hate it when you do that! Anakin. Please don’t do it again.’ Kenobi know what Anakin had in mind, he have no way talking him out of that mad move in the heat of battle. So he can only help out. He went along the starboard hull, accurately fired a proton torpedo at the shield generator region, seconds after Anakin blew the one on the opposite side.

The carrier was opening the huge blast doors in anticipation of getting feed from the freighters, the hard wired programming ensure they can't initiate close option until the open operation came to a halt. The blast doors on both sides began to close after all the shield generators were destroyed.

Traced by missiles and vulture droids, Anakin flew his craft inside the large hanger, dropped his full payload of concussion bombs inside as he fly pass it. He narrowly escaped from the last gap left by the blast door before it slams shut. Those vulture droids and missiles behind him all crash on to the blast door.  Instantly the whole carrier start blowing up from the inside.

With the problem gone, Anakin can now concentrate on the last weak spot. It was then, he spotted more enemy. One of the Trade Federation Lucrehulk class Battleship arrived but far away from the battle space.
(http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Lucrehulk-class_battleship)

‘Master, go help Master Toorani, I can finish this one alone!’ As always, Anakin think of helping others in a disadvantage at the heat of battle, it doesn’t matter they were clones or fellow Jedi.
‘I am going there, may the force be with you!’ Kenobi yaw his craft towards the other Freighter immediately.

Zyjin and Toorani was in trouble. Each was traced by no less than a dozen droid fighters, adding to the trouble were missiles from newly release Hailfire droids on the hull of the Freighter. Despite those droids were almost ejected into space by the loading tubes, their pack load of missiles are still a worry combine with the missiles from the carriers before it blew up.
(http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/IG-227_Hailfire-class_droid_tank)

Zyjin came up with a plan to shake off his tail as he skitters across the surface of the Freighter hull. A few second was what he needed to target the last weak points. To dealt with the mess behind him, he decided to use the Freighter itself.

‘R8, prepare for maneuvered 17. I will fix you up back at base.’ R8 did not seem to be happy with the decision, but it obeyed.

Zyjin fly to the end of the engine section of the huge freighter where it was a blind spot for the spider droids struggling to hold onto the hull. He suddenly disengage engine and put full forward thruster reverse. Combine with the power of the force, he manage slow down rapidly and sank itself right off the edge of the ship's hull. Submerged his craft into the plasmas emitted by the engines. All the missile locks instantly lost its target lock. Flew off blindly and the star fighters droids over shoot, they became easy targets for Zyjin as he fire his guns in an upward arc swing.

Once the threat was gone, he kick the craft engine to max and has it raise from the engine emission, all the way up to the point he would get the best target lock on the two top side weak-spot.

There were warnings from R8 on missiles coming his way. But, Zyjin had no time to deal with that, he engaged the lock and fired all his remaining missiles towards each weak spots. Just before he began to move away from the trouble closing in fast, he sense all missiles were wiped out by rapid blasters.

‘Nice move back there, Zyjin! I've got five of those weak points! But I don’t see any signs that thing coming apart. Plus I have used up all my gravity bombs! I say we go in …’ It was Anakin, saving the day for Zyjin for the first time as they cross their paths. 

All the missiles fired by Zyjin hit its targets. The gigantic Freighter was already attempting to jump to hyper space.

While a star ship make the jump gravity gets disrupted in the spaces around would case massive stress to ships structures. In the case of the freighters, massive vibrations occurred to every bolt and beams, its structure began to crack. Large components fall out of place, engines dislodged, generators crash on fuel tubes. Explosions from the inside start to rip the hull apart.

The other freighter Anakin hit attempted the same thing met the same fate, only breaking down a lot faster. Countless droids still in their inactive storage status were sent in all directions by explosions. Close to empty CIS capital ships arrived in time to witness the spectacular disintegration of the two freighters that supposed to re-arm them for war.

‘I say it is time to go home!’ Kenobi's voice crystal clear from the ear piece, ‘our job is done here.’

‘Understood General Kenobi, let’s go home!’ Toorani agreed.

Four republic star fighters broke away from the battle field with their unusual high speed, headed straight to their hyper spaces rings. Each ring was automatically adjusted by each droid of respected pilot to be ready for their mother-ship to dock with it and jump to hyper space right away. Toorani was the last to jump, he left behind the last gravity bomb on delay charge, preventing any enemy from tracing them immediately…

Just four Jedis managed leave behind a big mess for the CIS force, tens of thousands of inactive droids floating across the space among the millions of pieces of wreckages. 

Monday, 8 October 2012

Star Wars Project: Archery, Prelude


Star Wars ®  © Lucas Films  /  Story © ZJO  EEA Media Co

Project: Archery (A)  working title: Omnikhan  Saga


Initial development date: 6/Oct/2006
Rework, Version2012a: 8 oct 2012



Scope of this Star Wars story:

The Clone Wars was an under used era of the Star Wars canon, it was a time of great conflict, gigantic clash of ideas and military hardware. Countless stories can be told, therefore the majority of this story took place during the Clone Wars era, which was the time between the 2nd prequel  movie Attack of the Clone and the duration of the 3rd Prequel movie: Revenge of the Sith.

This story centers on completely original characters, although characters from the Star Wars movie canon would appear in cameo or supportive roles if the plot see fit, it will not deal with the romance of Anakin Skywalker, but it will deal with intergalactic politics and the empire.

It is written with science fiction story style the writer favors rather than just science fantasy, hence real science, attempt to explain existing Star Wars science, in depth political and social commentaries, detail military and intelligence secret services (think Mi-6) action are to be incorporated into the story line. This is no clone wars animation series, this is dark, complex cultural and philosophical conflict of galaxy far, far away.


Catch line:

In the Star Wars saga, Anakin Skywalker was The Chosen One, prophesied by the prophesy of ‘the one that would bring balance to the force’. This prophesy has deep roots within the Jedi order, while Anakin turned out to be ‘the one’, there were others assumed to be the one discovered before Skywalker was found.

This is the story of the runner-up…

 (Jan 2014 version:)


 Prelude

'Master Dooku! I am sorry that I am late.'

'No at all, Master Toorani, I only just got here myself! Welcome back to Coruscant! How was your mission?'

'It went well, until I was confronted with a dozen trade federation vulture droids.'

'I take that you have blasted them all back to star dust, haven't you, my friend!?'

'Oh, not exactly all of them, after I got half a dozen, I had to run before more popped out from those big ships. Lucky for me, I've got a fighter with hyper drive. We need personal starships with better controls to dog fight with these droids in the future! I am going to submit a detailed report and recommendation for the next Jedi Star Fighter project.'

'You, my friend, always keen on your hobby of designing new star fighters! I would have wished you be helping me on political matters instead!'

'Politics now? That's too complex for me I am afraid.'

'Star fighter design has always been too complex for me. We ride across the stars on vessels the force has no control of on how they run! I would felt vulnerable whenever I come to realize that fact. It is a great relief to know a Jedi like you is on the board of supervisors in the Space Vehicle Safety Bureau.'

'Stop praising me on that front my friend. You are the master in handling diplomatic and settling disputes. You work saves lives of millions on planets. Every time I went out, I start conflicts. Oh, by the way, I heard something happened in the council meeting this morning. They have missed you since you resigned from the council. Do you mind tell me what happened?'

'I had the same old argument with the rest of the council. The council was unwilling to commit A Jedi force to settle the Naboo situation. You know as well as me, that waiting on a vote by the Republic Senate is a waste of time. Unfortunately, that was the final decision. We will have to wait for the Queen of Naboo to fly all the way here for a special Senate session. My old padawan Qui-Gon leads that mission and apparently he have just discovered a new Chosen One. The council has voted to see this boy..'

'Another Chosen One to be? Master Windu brought one around a year and a half ago didn't he?'

'Oh, yes! He did, I remember the name was Zyjin. An orphan of whom his not force sensitive parents were killed just before Master Windu rescued him…wait… I hoped my memories served me well, tell me Toorani, isn't that youngling having a nap down there Zyjin?'

'Oh! That IS him! You are always alert and you still have good eyes master Dooku! Let's go try the drink I brought back from my trip shall we?'

'Gladly my friend!'

Zyjin Omnikhan was indeed the boy the two Jedi masters were talking about. He was having a nap after a hard day of training at the sun tanned observation hall at the top of the Jedi temple. He lay on the rarely used but comfy public rest benches outside the turbo lift entry junction.

He was barely asleep when Master Dooku and Master Toorani ran into each other. He was lying on a low-resting couch that was difficult to be spotted unless any one walk onto the risen platform that lead to the lifts. It was the always alerted Master Dooku who first sensed his presence in the force.

The early parts of the conversation were loud and clear to Zyjin's ears as the two master Jedi wait for the lift. He had to rely on the force and he was beginning to gain control of to catch the final bits of the conversation before it was all cut off by the fast moving turbo lift.

'What do you know about this new chosen one?'

'A kid that apparently has no father. Qui-Gon said the mother just carried the boy out of the blue. Qui-Gon really thinks the lad was conceived by the force. Fits the prophecy.'
'Interesting! Zyjin was a stond-out as well! His parents weren't force sensitive at all. Yet he had the level of Midi-chlorian count rival Master Yoda.'

'I was told the Midi-chlorian count of this new boy surpasses Master Yoda. However, you and I know very well, the knowledge of the force can never be measured by Midi-chlorian numbers. The chosen one is to bring the balance to the force, hence to bring balance to the galaxy. Simply having a high Midi-chlorian count in the blood won't mean he would fix the problems of the politics and conflicts today.'

'Have you come up with any new ways to fix them?'

'As a matter fact, I might have! Toorani, you saved my life, you are my best friend. You will be the first Jedi to learn that I will be resigning from the Jedi order tonight. I have my resignation documents with me right now. You are welcome to convince me not to resign while we drink…'

Zyjin's eaves dropping on the conversation between the masters was eventually severed by the accelerated turbo lift. He was the second Jedi to learn Dooku's plans to resign. However, he was the most insignificant one at the time.

The area Zyjin slept in was favourite meeting spot for Jedis in the Temple, it had the view of the great planet skyline, something to see for whoever is there to wait. Zyjin pick the spot for its quietness at selected hours of the day.

Finally He fell asleep. He dreamt of many things, but every time the images of his parents and those he used to know surfaces, his conscious attempted to divert his attention, to break off from those dreams. He will try to focus on teachings from Master Yoda. The short green, three toed Grand Jedi Master. He has warned him, he should let go of those memories:
'Forget you must. Yourself free from your past, you must. Cloud your minds attachments will. Feelings stronger they are from the past, forget the harder you try. *' (* Yoda grammar, he speaks with a strange grammar,)

Zyjin had again returned to the date which he took the first lesson from Master Yoda. He was the oldest of his class. Not just a few months older, but a year older than the second oldest of his class. There was a heated debate in which the council decided to take Zyjin into the Jedi order. It was the vote of the man whom he later learned as Master Dooku that sealed his fate.

'Questions?' Yoda asked the gathering of kids in Zyjin's dream.

'What IS The Force? Master!' That was Zyjin's first question, a question that sparked shock and surprises among his fellow classmates.

Yoda looked around the younglings which sat in a semi circle before him. He acknowledged the surprised expressions of everyone but Zyjin.

'Wonderful question this is! Dumb, a question will never be! If you don't know, ask you must. Learn you must! Excel with the knowledge of the force, learning is the path! First step, asking is.' He paused so he would turn to face Zyjin to answer his question.
'Simply put it is! An energy field the Force is, binds the Galaxy together it does. Flows through all the living things it is. Life lives with the force.'

Yoda raises his short hand to stop Zyjin from asking his second question. After a short pause, he continued.

'How does the living use the force? You wanted to ask is it?' Yoda smile apparently he read Zyjin's mind. 'Answer your question, Nordiiny will.'

Yoda looked over to the girl right beside Zyjin. She was the second oldest of the class.
'Through the Midi-chlorian. The force communicates with us via the Midi-chlorians. We can order the force to help us once we master the techniques.' Nordiiny replies to everybody what she have learn from prior caretakers.

'Not order, request, more like. Free yourself, closer with the force you are, the stronger you are with the force. Bond with the force, how to, we are here to learn!' Yoda continues…



____________________________________________

unedited version:



Prelude

‘Master Dooku! Sorry, I am running late.’

‘No at all, Master Toorani, I just got here! Welcome back to Coruscant! How was your mission?’

‘It went well, until I was confronted with a dozen trade federation vulture droids.’

‘I take that you have blasted them all back to star dust, haven’t you, my friend!?’

‘Oh, not exactly all of them, after I got half a dozen, I had to run before more popped out from those big ships. Lucky for me, I've got a fighter with hyper drive. We need personal starships with better controls to dog fight with these droids in the future! I am going to submit a detailed report and recommendation for the next Jedi Star Fighter project.’

‘You, my friend always keen on your hobby of designing new star fighters! I would have wished you be helping me on political matters instead!’

‘Politics now? That’s too complex for me I am afraid.’

‘Star fighter design has always been too complex for me. We ride across the stars on vessels the force has no control of on how they run! I would felt vulnerable whenever I come to realize that fact. It is a great relief to know a Jedi like you are on the board of supervisors in the Space Vehicle Safety Bureau.’

‘Stop praising me on that front my friend. You are the master in handling diplomatic and settling disputes. You work save lives of millions on planets. While every time I went out, I start conflicts. Oh, by the way, I heard something happen in the council meeting this morning. They miss you since you resigned from the council. Mind tell me what happened?’

‘I had the same old argument with the rest of the council. The council was unwilling to commit A Jedi force to settle the Naboo situation. You know as well as me, waiting on a vote by the Republic Senate as it is, is a waste of time. Unfortunately, that was the final decision. We will have to wait for the Queen from Naboo to fly all the way here for a special Senate session. My old padawan Qui-Gon leads that mission and apparently he have just discovered a new chosen one. The council has voted to see this boy..’

‘Another chosen one to be? Master Windu brought one around a year and a half ago didn’t he?’

‘Oh, yes! He did, I remember the name was Zyjin. An orphan of whom his force insensitive parents were killed just before Master Windu rescued him…wait… I hoped my memories served me well, tell me Toorani, isn’t that youngling having a nap down there, is Zyjin?’

‘Oh! That’s him, you are always alert and you still have good eyes master Dooku! Let's go try the drink I brought back from my trip shall we?’

‘Gladly my friend!’



Zyjin Omnikhan is the boy the two Jedi masters were talking about. He was having a nap after a hard day of training at the sun tanned observation hall at the top of the Jedi temple. He lay on the rarely used but comfy public rest benches outside the turbo lift entry junction.

He was barely asleep when Master Dooku and Master Toorani ran into each other. Since he was lying on a low resting couch that was difficult to be spotted, until any one walk higher onto the platform lead to the lifts. It was the always alerted Master Dooku who first sensed his presences in the force.

The early parts of the conversation were loud and clear to Zyjin’s ears as the two master Jedi wait for the lift. He has to rely on the force he was beginning to gain control of to catch the final bits of the conversation before it was all cut off by the fast moving turbo lift.

‘What do you know about this new chosen one?’

‘A kid apparently has no father. Qui-Gon said the mother just carried the boy out of the blue. Qui-Gon really thinks the lad was conceived by the force. Fits the prophecy.’

‘Interesting! Zyjin was a stood out as well! His parents weren’t force sensitive at all. Yet he had the level of Midi-chlorian count rival Master Yoda.’

‘I was told the Midi-chlorian count of this new boy surpasses Master Yoda. However, you and I know very well, the knowledge of the force can never be measured by Midi-chlorian numbers. The chosen one is to bring the balance to the force, hence to bring balance to the galaxy. Simply had a high Midi-chlorian count in the blood won’t mean he would fix the problems of the politics and conflicts today.’

‘Have you come up with any new ways to fix them?’

‘As a matter fact, I might have! Toorani, you saved my life, you are my best friend. You will be the first Jedi to learn, I will be resigning from the Jedi order tonight. I have my resignation documents with me right now. You are welcome to convince me not to resign while we drink…’

Zyjin’s ear drop on the conversation between the masters was eventually sever by the accelerated turbo lift. He was the second Jedi to learn Dooku’s plans to resign. However, he was the most insignificant one at the time.

The area Zyjin sleeps was favorite meeting spot for Jedis in the Temple, it has the view of the great planet skyline, something to see for whoever is there to wait. Zyjin pick the spot for its quietness at selected hours of the day.

Finally He fell asleep. He dreamt off many things, but every time the images of his parents and those he used to know surfaces, his conscious attempted to divert his attention, to break off from those dreams. He will try to focus on teachings from Master Yoda. The shot green, three toed Grand Jedi Master. He has warned him, he should let go of those memories:

‘Forget you must. Yourself free from your past, you must. Cloud your minds attachments will. Feelings stronger they are from the past, forget the harder you try. *’  (* Yoda grammar, he speaks with a strange grammar,)

Zyjin has again, returned to the date which he took the first lesson from Master Yoda. He was the oldest of his class. Not just a few months older, but a year older than the second oldest of his class. There was heated debate which the council decided to take Zyjin into the Jedi order. It was the vote of the man whom he later learns as Master Dooku that sealed his fate.

‘Questions?’ Yoda asked the gathering of kids in Zyjin’s dream.

‘What IS The Force? Master!’ That was Zyjin’s first question, a question that sparked shock and surprises among his fellow classmates.

Yoda looked around the younglings sat in a semi circle before him. He acknowledged the surprised expressions of everyone but Zyjin.

‘Wonderful questions this is! Dumb, a question will never be! If you don’t know, ask you must. Learn you must! Excel with the knowledge of the force, learning is the path! First step, ask is.’ He paused so he would turn to face Zyjin to answer his question.

‘Simply put it! An energy field the Force is, binds the Galaxy together it does. Flows through all the living things it is. Life lives with the force.’

Yoda raises his short hand to stop Zyjin from asking his second question. After a short pause, he continued.

‘How does the living use the force? You wanted to ask is it?’ Yoda smile apparently he read Zyjin’s mind. ‘Answer your question, Nordiiny will.’

Yoda looked over to the girl right beside Zyjin. She was the second oldest of the class.

‘Through the Midi-chlorian. The force communicates with us via the Midi-chlorians. We can order the force to help us once we master the techniques.’ Nordiiny replies to everybody what she have learn from prior caretakers.

‘Not order, request, more like. Free yourself, closer with the force you are, the stronger you are with the force. Bond with the force, how to, we are here to learn!’ Yoda continues…
end Prelude